Hello everyone!
Susanna Hill is once again hosting her awesome Valentiny Contest. This year, the story must be about curiosity. For rules, details, and a chance to read all of the other amazing entries, please visit:
Here is my entry:
CANDY CONUNDRUM
I wonder what they taste like.
The Hug Me heart looks good.
My mommy says, “Don’t eat them.”
My tummy says, I should.
I smell True Love and Kiss Me,
then give Be Mine a lick.
I chew up Smile and Soul Mate…Yuck!
I think I might be sick.
I wonder why they make them,
those pretty hearts I ate,
to give to someone that you love
…or someone that you hate.
I hope you enjoyed and HAPPY VALENTINE’S DAY!!!
Update:
Bah hah hah! What a clever twist. I love it.
Thank you!
Short, sweet and delightful, Kelly! And nice job with the curiosity! My favorite part is the one she licks (and I bet puts back! 🙂 ) Thanks for joining in the Valentiny fun!
Thanks again for hosting the contest, Susanna! I always have fun playing with the challenge you create!
Great content! Super high-quality! Keep it up! 🙂
Thank you very much!
Great rhyming story, and fun ending. Good luck!
Thank you!
Very clever! I’ve always like the look of conversation hearts but that chalky consistency and taste … blech! Great job in capturing that!
Haha! Thanks!
Clever and fun. Gotta love the twist 🙂
Thanks!
Very cute! Great rhyme. I happen to like candy hearts! Good luck!
Thanks! I do too, but not as much as chocolate 😉
So cute and bouncy to read aloud. Love the funny ending!
Thanks!
Ha! This is SO fun, Kelly! Great rhyming! I didn’t want it to end!
Thank you!
This is adorable! HaHa! Well done! I love the title. Best wishes on the contest!
Thanks 🙂
Fun rhymes! I did not want it to stop!
Thank you!
Great entry! Good luck!
Thanks, Carole!
You really made me laugh! : D Good Luck!!!
Thank you, Jenna!
Haha! Love that twist!
Thanks!
Nice twist!
Thank you!
Good luck!! Happy Valentine’s Day l. 😊
Thanks, Mandy!
So funny and cute, Kelly! I love it!!!
Thank you, Heather!